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Open Poetry #36

Encapsulation of FIction

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

0 posted 2005-07-13 01:51 PM

Sun drenched days pass
Turn to golden afternoons
Summer heat caresses my skin
Waiting for the night to wrap me in your arms

When I can be with you again
Under a sky that shimmers like Diamonds

Your eyes bewitch, they draw me in
Dark flames that burn where they touch
Your smile lights my nights
Like the flash of a shooting star

Captive, helpless against the tides
That swept us along in the dance
Of passion intertwined
A brief interlude of time out of time

When two realities touched, overlapped
And became one for a space
Measured not by hours
But by heartbeats, laughter, touch, despair

In my dreams I still see you
I feel the phantom touch of your hands against my
skin
Setting me aflame once more

I still hear your voice in my ears
Whispering words of desire.....

Was it all just a dream?
Your memory haunts me still.........

"What we have here is a failure to communicate" From the movie "Cool hand luke", one of my favorites;

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

1 posted 2005-07-13 01:52 PM

Sorry about the typo, lol

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-13 02:33 PM

good to see you writing again

and what a romantic write of love it is

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

3 posted 2005-07-13 02:37 PM

As much as I still miss her, I have had to move on, thank you for your response, hope everything is well, Steve

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-07-14 09:31 AM

Truely different than anything you have ever written...

even the fundamentals...

as someone else once said, it is always a beautiful thing when one can write to ones own in such a moving way.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

5 posted 2005-07-16 11:26 AM

Thank you all for the replies, this post was for you sue, it was from the heart, Steve.

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