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louise
New Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 8

0 posted 2005-07-14 05:51 PM

“I am sure that sweetness fills your eyes,
Like the magic you sprinkle on my soul
Sparks and then shines.
Dusty is my heart,
As you gently spread it apart
And peer into
A deep red harvest moon,
That floats inside.
You gave that moon to me,
So long ago,
And I have kept her there.
She warms me
And bathes me in a soft echo of your love,
Which beats and
Resonates
Like a howling wind
Slamming a secret trap door
Which we never closed,
That which we never
Dare
Close.

I will always believe in you.
I can see what you are too
Close to recognize.
Beautiful Man,
I see the hazel of trees in your eyes
So round and polished
Like amber.
Your soul,
Which is usually tucked away,
Spills out before me
In all your glory.
You electrify the air
With greens and yellows.
Just to be close to you
Sets my soul playfully through
Our time together.

Find security in the love
I have for you.
It lies there like a ruby waiting
To be plucked from
My extended hands; it is
My gift to you.
Like father Time and mother Earth
We have fostered its existence.

You, gentle creature,
You, feather pillow,
You, soft melody of yesterday…
Watch your reflection
Glow from my fingertips
Dance and flicker
Like candle light and
Know
Thyself!”

BeWitched
Junior Member

since 2005-07-06

Posts 31

1 posted 2005-07-14 05:55 PM

Wow, I'm liking your stuff. Glad you're here.

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

2 posted 2005-07-14 06:58 PM

Nicely intense.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-07-15 03:51 AM

very positive write
enjoyed

louise
New Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 8

4 posted 2005-07-15 11:49 AM

Thanks to all for reading my poem. I am happy to be a part of a community of writers.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-07-15 06:42 PM

OhLouise~

I very much like this -

'Beautiful Man,
I see the hazel of trees in your eyes'

- ah ... I, too, have seen that hazel~

Thank you for sharing with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-07-15 11:56 PM

Enjoyed...James

louise
New Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 8

7 posted 2005-07-16 12:01 PM

Thanks so much. I really mean it. I am so glad to share with you all.

she'll_be_apples
Junior Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 22

8 posted 2005-07-16 05:33 AM

"I see the hazel of trees in your eyes"

nice visuals

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-07-16 05:57 AM

very nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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