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Kevo
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0 posted 2005-07-09 04:05 PM


The Farmer and the Rain

Sweet summer rain
deftly augers its destined trail
beneath the worn soles of
a weathered spirit.

Crops all but lost
to sweltering air
once dry beyond
days of reasoning.

So it begins,
a new day falls
heavily upon humbled home,
and desperate fields.

Yet, the salt stays
heavily upon
broken shoulders.

Even amidst the rain
his brow furls,
and his eyes weep.

His breath unquenched
still heaves upon
a burdened breast.

And yet he remains
amidst gasping fissures,
and dusted crops.

Ever searching
the crowding hues of twilight,
the serenity of dawn,
and the infinite majesty of
the Heavens soaked in stars
for another taste of
sweet summer rain.

Copyright, Kevin V. Reese, 2005

© Copyright 2005 Kevin Reese - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-09 11:51 PM


a good thirsty write

quote:
And yet he remains
amidst gasping fissures,
and dusted crops.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-07-10 12:21 PM


If a rain dance will help, I'll go get myself some moccassins and start dancing!

"Yet, the salt stays
heavily upon
broken shoulders."

~ Heart-breaking.


Linda

iliana
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3 posted 2005-07-10 01:33 AM


Rain is on the way, Kevin.  Enjoyed this; well written.
Kevo
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4 posted 2005-07-10 01:50 AM


Thank you so much for your kind replies.  

A rain-dance might help!

I sure hope so!  We just received a little bit.  We had a nice storm at the end of April that brought among other things, much rain and tornadoes.  But not much since then.  We received 50" of rain last year, but only about 13" so far this year.  We are in extreme drought conditions.  My tank (pond) is down 12" and the lake is down about 10 feet from what they say.  Farmers are struggling quite a bit with irrigation.  usually, in this part of Texas rain isn't an issue.  Man, we need some good rain.  I hope your right about the forecast.  Go ahead and start that rain-dance.  Cheers!

Thanks for checking in and reading.  It's good to be back!

Kevin  

ice
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5 posted 2005-07-10 06:50 AM


Kevo
It rained here all last summer, plants rotted, crops drowned...

I am a landscaper, out in all kinds of weather, dealing with the elements, just like the farmer in this poem, I know how he feels.

But he is more important than me, he feeds us, and he takes his responsibility seriously...

You have portrayed his feelings well...

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6 posted 2005-07-10 09:16 AM


It would be wonderful to have 3-4 years of "Camelot" weather, wouldn't it, Kevin? Just enough rain and sunshine to make it right for all of the farmers and ranchers...

Lived for about a decade on that edge - would still be out there, but life dealt a bend in the road.

However, this doesn't keep me from praying for the ones that put food on our tables. I know whence it comes - and I also know that those that put it there don't want praise, just to see their own families' faces smile at what bounty can be placed before them, as the father/farmer/rancher shares with neighbors and friends...

Yes, I know...as do you, the responsibility you bear.

Thank you.

iliana
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7 posted 2005-09-30 01:07 AM


Kevin, this is quite a painting...much enjoyed, especially the last verse.   ....jo
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