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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-09-29 04:02 AM



Since You Have Been Gone

Having you upon my mind
Gazing a wide blue yonder
Since you have been gone
My heart had grown fonder

Whilst viewing the horizon
Far across the ocean blue
In your absence tears flow
Because I am missing you

Thinking of you as always
While waves lap the shore
Overwhelmed with longing
As I yearn more and more

Your absence is being felt
Here as I knelt by the sea
Waves depart as I ponder
Hoping you remember me

HopeĀ©2005
Link to poem with music and graphic below http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/93/poem_781166.html

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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-09-29 06:09 AM


Dear Hope, this is very beautiful, even if so deeply melancholic. And how you manage the length of the line so precisely!!

You are very good!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2005-09-29 09:56 AM


Hope~
So many moments bring those we love and have loved to our minds and hearts~

Lovely, lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

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Sharksbean
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jax
3 posted 2005-09-29 11:29 PM


this is very sweet thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

iliana
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4 posted 2005-09-29 11:57 PM


Hope, this is lovely....and it is laid out in perfection.   ....jo
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