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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-09 07:34 AM


My Cup of Brie

The re that fills my cup of brie
Are phantoms of a fantasy?
It plays upon my nerves in drones
And sinks into my very bones

Smothering the bright of day
Darkening my light of way
Changing odors of my breathe
Wrapping me a cloth of seethe

It haunts the hollows of my dreams
Cutting me with sharp of fleam
Letting blood to run the core
To cure the fantasy of more

But letting blood has set the rue
Colored brie with red of you
And with my fingers, touch the Braille
That burns on ropes that set the sail

I sail a phantoms fantasy
An ecstasy of agony


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-07-09 07:37 AM


dang Sy...you are writing dark...
but it still looks good on you

good morning to you

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-07-09 10:56 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

It appears that yours was not a restful sleep! Tonight will be better! Angel promise!

I do suppose that after a cup of brie, there would be odors to your breath! lol

As perverse as this may seem, I do understand at times ~ "I sail a phantoms fantasy
An ecstasy of agony"

Sending you a potion of love and devotion,
Liqueur

EA
Flowers


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2005-07-09 11:01 AM


But letting blood has set the rue
Colored brie with red of you
And with my fingers, touch the Braille
That burns on ropes that set the sail

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
make it raspberry baby... raspberry


that verse is cooler than Cherry Kool-aid.

*ww*


Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2005-07-09 06:23 PM


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Juju
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5 posted 2005-07-09 08:22 PM


I love your rhymes

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-07-09 11:01 PM


It's a dang good thing
I LOVE cheese!






Midnitesun
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7 posted 2005-07-09 11:47 PM


"An ecstasy of agony"

hmmm, brie does that for/to you? LOL

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-07-10 08:10 AM


passing
Thank you my sweet. Hugs

Earth Angel
Took the potion and had a great night. LOL


JM,
Love any kind of cold drink. Having computer
problems with all the wind and rain.
Will write soon.

Ceinwyn
Thank you, thank you.

Juju
Love your comments.

Sunshine
Especialy cheese cake, Hugs

Midnitesun
Well, some brie does. LOL

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