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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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0 posted 2005-07-01 10:58 PM


In your past
You did bad things
But you did good things
In the presant
To make up for what
You had done

You helped the poor,
Ones without parents,
The disabled,
Those who were widowed,
And those with no home

You showed them all love,
Courage,
And the help to see
That it was not their fault
That they ended up with these problems

You showed them
That for once
Someone really cared for them
And that they
Would never be forgotten


Poetry is beauty in words.

© Copyright 2005 sweetpoetess - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-07-01 11:21 PM


Julie~
Good deeds today outweigh the bad of the past~
Nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-01 11:22 PM


very sweet write
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-07-02 12:53 PM


Nice writing...James
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2005-07-02 11:42 AM


Gratitude for and respect to such people.  Why are they the minority...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-07-02 03:43 PM


Very nice words

Bodger

PazSqual
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6 posted 2005-08-02 10:48 AM


People like this are so amazing, yet so few, nice write. Thank you for sharing, Paz
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