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Batteries Not Included
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Batteries Not Included tension pulls stretching need beyond reach dead cells scoffing feeling the disrespect in hushed tones waiting a racing heart the only sound a thousand tears draining feeling the aloneness under my skin standing lost waiting tripping the day away M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ah... yes..the title pulled me in and I am left not sure if what I was thinking was right..  Nice job with this! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
had a very busy yesterday... oil change blood tests bill paying.... dead battery... stuck in parking lot waiting waiting waiting AAA waiting waiting waiting charged just enough to get to Advance Auto to die again and buy and have installed a new battery but today it is I that feels drained  M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 and such is life. unjust that it may be at times... remember my satan van? The battery went dead once and my son put in a new one...but didn't "lock it down" by time I figured out why I was stalling out every time I made a turn the battery cable was fried!! good times...and a lesson learnt. We learn from everything...even it it's just that we need help or encouragement. I hope your today and tomorrow is brighter! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If all you need is Triple AAA batteries... you must drive an itty bitty car...  Sorry - my brain jerked.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh sunshiny one.... tsk.. AAA is the auto dudes that come and fix you for a fee... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Susan...  I know...just playing with the AAA's up there... my bad...  That's what she gets from me for the title...like I said, my brain jerked! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Still chuckling about Sunshine's reply. But seriously, I do know the feeling you wrote so well. I try to get a few moments meditation during those trying times in life. I just slip away from it all. Patricia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you guys are too much... trying to smile through it all.. a dead body today barely getting out of bed hugs M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And I thought this was going to be reviewed... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
That's one way to wake up the mods! Heehee (Good line, 'Shine) |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
This is nicely done, M. I love the title. Bob |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I was thinking the same think Larry did. ahahahahaha!! I was wondering, now who looked over this one? Now Sunshine, where did you get the AAA idea from, Hon??  Ya'll are so cute!! Hugs, Ethel Oh, bye the way, M...I love the title and the poem!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
lol @ sunshine's reply  And goodness, I hope today is better. I think ice cream is in order after a day like that! Okay, maybe I just really want ice cream. But really!! You deserve some ice cream after a day like that. Good to read ya  Take care...Always, Alyssa Hupomeno. |
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