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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Exposed Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon Somebody told me to keep my eye on you They saw something you kept out of view You thought it was hidden -- so perfectly concealed But the more that you hide -- the more is revealed… You’ve been exposed For all to see You’ve been exposed Don’t lie to me You’ve been exposed So there’s no use Now you’re exposed And I know the truth You thought you were clever -- that no one would know All smoke and mirrors -- all talk and show Living two lives -- one behind the scenes Your secret’s discovered, and you know what that means You’ve been exposed For all to see You’ve been exposed Don’t lie to me You’ve been exposed So there’s no use Now you’re exposed And I know the truth You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ooops!!The truth does always come out sooner or later. Very good writing Mark. Thanks for sharing. Hugs,  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
know the feeling |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yep, it happens all to often, and sometimes it is to late when we find out the truth. very well written Mark. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Once again...very well done Mark. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ethel, it sure does. Thanks for the read & reply. DIxie: not pleasant, is it? Gentle Spirit: I guess "too late" is relative, but as long as we learn from the experience, I suppose we'll be the better for it. Thanks for your thoughts. Hi Nancy, thank you for your encouraging words. We've probably all felt such an "ouch" at one time or another... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A song...that's what this is... have you set it to music? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Right you are, Karilea. I haven't set it to music yet but will in the next couple of weeks. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Most definitely lyrical material... Well written and a pleasure to read. I know where this is coming from, indeed. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
excellent write ... speaks volumes!! sometimes we look at how truth effects others .... all that really matters is what it means to us ... * Ct |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words sing of that which many of us have experienced and exposed them for what they are.....Very well said....*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no, not pleasant at all, but in the end, it's the best feeling in the world to finally see the truth and be able to move on had to read this again because it fits so well into a situation I've had recently the internet is a playground for these kinds of people, because it's not so easy to be exposed here online |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
JesusChristPose: Thank you for the kind words (and my apologies for the delayed acknowledgement!). Hey Ct: Thank you much. But I think that our actions matter not only to us but also the consequence it brings onto others, and for that, we must claim responsibility. Hi Startime55: I appreciate your read and comments. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Dixie; Ohhhhhh yeah. But whether they like it or not, it's metaphysical law that the Truth will always surface. So it's better to be truthful upfront and avoid the unnecessary unpleasantries, wasted time, energy, and efforts. Sorry to hear about your experience, but you're right -- it is good to come to terms, learn from it, and move on a better human being. Thanks for your thoughts... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
uh oh and here I thought changing my hair color would suffice! nope, even that can't cover my vice! LOL, whatever the inspiration for this was, being exposed is a revealing experience   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, definitely more careful now about who I interact with  lesson learned |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mark..although I'm not on here much anymore, you remain a name I look for when I stop by for I know I can count on you for wonderful meter and rhyme inside a well composed poem. This is no exception  Ruth |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kacy... I suppose some kinds of exposures (like 24 or 36...) are not so bad afterall... Hi Ruth: I am humbled and smiling from your warm words -- thank you for your support and encouragement. I appreciate your appreciation very much. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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