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Moments Quench
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Moments Quench |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Down ~*~Down Soaked and saturated sponge of breath held cheeks Clouds emptied to the thirsty sage relief now speaks Pour the overwhelming spill Pour the parched horizon fill Steam, eludes to heat exhausted to be cool Clear the air of Jupiter slaking dismal rule Down ~*~Down Upon the gasping tongues of trumpet flutes Hour shower that oppression mutes Drum upon the wind a whisper Heard in monotone the hot suns blister Pour the sparkling seltzer new again Pour another cup remember when Down ~*~Down To see through shirt and tempo new Wet the smile of warbler true Lessening the weighted air Lightning strikes on hazards fair Drip dry dreams a moment’s pause Quench the cracked dry earth because Down ~*~Down The surface gleams Still thirsty are these damp daydreams Copyright Kkh 07/16/05 |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! I think I need something powerful to drink to keep me from drowning....Amazing vision felt....*big hugs* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This reminds me of the bits and pieces of Hurricane Dennis that we're experiencing. It isn't all that bad here. Actually, it's somewhat refreshing to get rid of the muggy July feeling. I wish it had been kinder elsewhere! It is always a pleasure to read your work; I so enjoy how you apply sound to image. miscellanea |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have to agree with Karen .... I AM THIRSTY!!! My lips were drying as I read and now find myself parched!! an Excellent write * * * * * Ct |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Wow...that was...WOW. Beautiful...DAGONIT!! Why can't I be that good?! I felt my very worries and dried sense of humanity quenched with your words. WOW! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you all for your responses. Such sweet hearts grace this blue. Hugs, TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done here *reaching for ice water* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To see through shirt and tempo new Wet the smile of warbler true Lessening the weighted air Lightning strikes on hazards fair Drip dry dreams a moment’s pause Quench the cracked dry earth because Down ~*~Down The surface gleams Still thirsty are these damp daydreams May I have another tall, cool frosty karaft of this....wonderful! |
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