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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Have You Ever ... ? ~*Marge Tindal*~  Have you ever watched a sunset cry, dripping tears across a twilight sky ? Caught in prisms of lavender light, just before she says goodnight. A mist, so light, that drifts into the night to fall as morning dew. To softly dance across the lawn, toweled again upon the dawn. Oh, I have seen a sunset cry, laying her sorrow across a night sky. Felt the dew so heavy-laden, awaiting return of morning maiden. Where upon a tear-kissed flower, sunbeams danced within dew-shower. Warmed the gentle lily's bed, lifting hearts to smile instead. Next time you watch a sunset, squint with all your might, that you may catch her teardrops, before the morn takes light. ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ *Just a little repost from about 5 years ago* ~Because ... sometimes the sunset cries my tears and I eagerly await the new dawning~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful!!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Lovely Marge!! Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved the flow and thoughts to this...glad you reposted this, I don't think I got to read it the first go round.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marge, What a gifting you have given! Your words speak the color of the sunset. Elegant, Marge! Have you ever watched a sunset cry, dripping tears across a twilight sky ? Caught in prisms of lavender light, just before she says goodnight." I think I have seen those dripping tears of sunset's cry. You can bet I'll be watching the horizon from now on. Maybe with a tissue in hand! That stanza alone lends itself to much reflection! miscee [This message has been edited by miscellanea (04-23-2005 12:32 AM).] |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Oh wow, awesome photo, beautiful words to accompany it... ENJOYED. |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is wonderful! love, Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Gorgeous picture and poignant write. I'm glad I got to see and read it. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gorgeous in presentation and content, dear Marge! How I love those colors! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Shed softly the tears of the ending day… this is a beautiful write! You captured the magic at sunset so very well. Ohhhh, may I add… The picture that you posted with this poem, it reminded me of when I was little and we played the game, “What do the clouds look like?” Maybe it was because I read your words, seeing the sunset as a “she” and the “morning maiden” in my mind, but when I scrolled back up and glanced at the clouds, the lower cloud that encompasses the bottom of the picture – it struck me that it resembles a lady stretched out. The two arms out in front are to the right of the picture, then going from right to left – her head and body. Most likely people will say, “I don’t see that..” But I could not resist adding this in as if it touches on the magic of your poem! Enchanting write! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, yes, I see HER dear Aleta! Love, Margherita  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's my fourth time back to this beauty since it was posted....I guess I really ought to stop and tell you how good I think it is! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awe-some! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is just so beautiful that it leaves me speechless Marge, your appreciation of nature touches me. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You've so beautifully captured the feelings I used to own, when I was in love... This Margie, was amazingly beautiful..simply awesome..thanks so much for writing and sharing. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I have watched and written about many sunsets but this is a totally fresh take on them - enjoyed much |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...Jmaes |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
absolutely georgous My spirit will rise |
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