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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-04-29 06:36 AM



you said you liked it
how my woodie stuck out
in your parking lot

that most guys brought average
the typical smooth and polished
without charactor or style

and just stuck them there
waiting for you to be impressed
and fit them in some how

during the rush hour
and sometimes after
but mine was different

comfortable but a bit rough
bigger than you were used to
but you didn't mind adjusting

and I should bring it around more


_______________
dark  (scribblenote: parking at the pen is for compacts only..unless you get there first)


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-04-29 06:42 AM


wouldn't I swoon?  smiles and hugs, Happy Friday....
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-29 06:43 AM


yeah
nice

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-04-29 06:58 AM





Loving your humor today...

left a huge smile!

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2005-04-29 10:01 AM


"comfortable but a bit rough
bigger than you were used to
but you didn't mind adjusting"


flexibility is a good thing  
enjoyed this  

vandana
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5 posted 2005-04-29 10:05 AM


good read
Beki
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6 posted 2005-04-29 12:36 PM


you bad boy you! I have been away too long and I have missed reading your work
Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
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7 posted 2005-04-29 12:59 PM


"and I should bring it around more"

Oohhhhh yeah!!!! D you can park at my place anytime...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-04-29 01:00 PM


damn D, ya just gave me ear to ear grinzzz...

Hugs and happy friday!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2005-04-29 02:19 PM


Mmmmmmm wicked thoughts about the parking lot and your full sized sedan amongst all those little compacts

You crack me up and smile me delighted -

Enjoy you baby -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Ratleader
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10 posted 2005-04-29 02:19 PM


how my woodie stuck out
in your parking lot

....in the parking lot? Hope you don't get arrested.....

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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11 posted 2005-04-29 11:40 PM


comfortable but a bit rough
bigger than you were used to
but you didn't mind adjusting

and I should bring it around more


you are such a slut

MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-04-30 04:05 AM




  

  yep, you got a way with words

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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