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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-22 05:36 PM



Their time has come
(again)
and they tell the world
to piss off
as they conquer the fences,
they're movers and shakers
and hide from the undertaker
and overextend their stay
on the lawns that invent them,
they laugh down the aisles
and make no apology
when they crack thru the concrete
and smear color on pristine conventions,
thy're colored girls that jump double dutch
on ivory playgrounds
and old dirty sluts that get off
seducing old poets  
wearing tattered black dresses,
and everything your mother told you
not even to think of,
they breathe me in yellow
when i itch to detox
of this white world's pretentions
they run with my mind,
doing overtime
on imagination's journey,
on this wonderful day of dementia.

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-22 05:48 PM


Their time has come
(again)
and they tell the world
to piss off
as they conquer the fences,
they're movers and shakers
and hide from the undertaker
and overextend their stay
on the lawns that invent them,
they laugh down the aisles
and make no apology
when they crack thru the concrete
and smear color on pristine conventions,
thy're colored girls that jump double dutch
on ivory playgrounds
and old dirty sluts that get off
seducing old poets  
wearing tattered black dresses,
and everything your mother told you
not even to think of,
they breathe me in yellow
when i itch to detox
of this white world's pretentions
they run with my mind,
doing overtime
on imagination's journey,
on this wonderful day of dementia.

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-22 05:50 PM


Sounds right

I'm from Shepherd's Bush and the ones from the Congo

Yes

Tell everyone that where you are from has value

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-04-22 07:35 PM


yes, there they are again

why fight it?

Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2005-04-22 08:18 PM


Out with the roundup, that will send them on their way, a good way to keep fit.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-04-22 08:48 PM


Excellent write...so much enjoyed.
Hugs pretty lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2005-04-22 10:09 PM


Ha! Will never see dandelions the same again...impertinent cusses aren't they!!

Which reminds me, gotta do the Dandelion Stomp  this weekend meself.

Impertinent cusses! There are 'others' with whom I'd rather dance!

j.

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
7 posted 2005-04-22 10:35 PM


The Dandelion Stomp sounds pretty good to me, too.  Again, I find myself amazed at your writing.  I seldom know where it will take me.  

          miscee

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2005-04-23 12:42 PM


Fantastic write, dear Michele!

Rick noooo! Find another way to keep fit!

They reflect the sunlight so beautifully!

Love,
Margherita

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
9 posted 2005-04-23 04:45 PM


i know its been a while...for a good bump!
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
10 posted 2005-04-23 05:23 PM


Michele....I've always loved dandelions...again and again!  
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

11 posted 2005-04-23 07:26 PM


Oh FM, geez Inky what ya doin to me?

WOW!

M  


p.s I need you to write more of Dandelions.. yes?

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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