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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2005-03-29 09:57 PM




  

Maybe not today
nor even tomorrow
will we pick it up again,
like it never had a pause
between the times we rode
that thrill coaster together,

but you are always welcome,
on some dreamless evening
when you may face a revelation
that yes, life is lonely at times,
even for one like you, who feigns
the air of self suffieciency
and never needs too much more
than a hayromp from time to time,

so maybe not today
nor as soon as the morrow,

but just hold me close somehow,
in your book of
who can i call this wretced night,

and don't be shy or hesitate,
fearing it's too late
or that too many fullfaced moons
have come and gone,

and always know
that i can never close the door,
to one who bloomed thru winters graveyard
and scattered magic flowers
along the casket of this heart.




[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-30-2005 08:22 AM).]

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Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
1 posted 2005-03-29 10:42 PM


"and don't be shy or hesitate,
fearing it's too late
or that too many fullfaced moons
have come and gone,"

I like this side of your pen.  It reminds me why I often visit the altar of the goddess...

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2005-03-29 10:49 PM


why thank you
for bowing

and you didnt even make me look up a word
in the old dictionary.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2005-03-29 11:18 PM


Wow. I loved this. This is my favorite of yours.

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2005-03-30 02:38 AM


but you are always welcome,
on some dreamless night
when you may face some revelation
that yes, life is lonely at times

You're all heart goldielocks, it's what's inside your basket that counts and you just gave yourself away.  It's all so good, don't you ever doubt it, blondie!



HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2005-03-30 04:01 AM


Ohh I just loved this because I have been going through those same thoughts

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2005-03-30 07:52 AM


like it never had a pause

yeah, isn't it strange
how we do that

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2005-03-30 08:00 AM


inkedgoddess
Now that's what friendship is all about.
Lovely

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
8 posted 2005-03-30 09:07 AM


"and always know
that i can never close the door,
to one who bloomed thru winters graveyard
and scattered magic flowers
along the casket of this heart"

magic flowers..perfecto!

  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2005-03-30 10:39 AM


Wonderful write Michele..
I so enjoy reading you!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
10 posted 2005-03-30 10:48 AM


and always know
that i can never close the door,
to one who bloomed thru winters graveyard
and scattered magic flowers
along the casket of this heart.

~*~

Dang, Michele, this echoes
a melancholy haunt...

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
11 posted 2005-03-30 12:30 PM


very nice images here

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
12 posted 2005-03-30 02:31 PM


Wonderful write!

JL


inkedgoddess
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Posts 7392
Ohio
13 posted 2005-03-31 06:56 AM


thanks a bunch of flowers

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

14 posted 2005-04-23 07:21 PM


OMG, how in the hell did I miss this fantabulous write.

sigh Inky

it's a

M

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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