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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-22 07:43 AM


Lament

A lament within the light
And a constant of my night
Of whispers playing heart strings
And the music that it brings

A butterfly, a rainbow path
The essence of a lovely bath
The touching of your finger tips
The sensual in your lingers lips

The seething of odors bloom
The weaving of a lovers loom
A stroll within gardens green
The magic of a lover’s scene

From a bouquet of the day
To a dreamers light of way
You are the moon the sun the stars
You are my near you are my far

You are the core what will be done
You are the other half of one


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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2005-04-22 07:52 AM


such sweet lamenting
like the sun and moon
when they touch paths
in the crossover

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-22 08:50 AM


From a bouquet of the day
To a dreamers light of way
You are the moon the sun the stars
You are my near you are my far

well, sir, I believe I can say this freely about the rest here, we feel the same way about you...smile and hugs
thank you for a wonderful great 1st morning read...time for java?



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-04-22 09:18 AM


"From a bouquet of the day
To a dreamers light of way
You are the moon the sun the stars
You are my near you are my far

You are the core what will be done
You are the other half of one"

A beautiful beautiful morning read dear Sy!
Very much enjoyed.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2005-04-22 09:31 AM


Seymour;
Just beautiful, a scene of love seen.
Well done, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

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just out of reach
5 posted 2005-04-22 10:31 AM


Just beautiful Seymour.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-22 10:33 AM


precious
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2005-04-22 10:34 AM


A lament within the light
And a constant of my night
Of whispers playing heart strings
And the music that it brings

A butterfly, a rainbow path
The essence of a lovely bath
The touching of your finger tips
The sensual in your lingers lips
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A stroll within gardens green
The magic of a lover’s scene
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You are the moon the sun the stars
You are my near you are my far

You are the core what will be done
You are the other half of one

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!

Randy is such a romantic lil dragon. LOL

Your tender intend is matched only by your cadenced rhyme speak.

*ww*



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