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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-04-21 01:53 PM

her gypsy’s fire
spills
from amber lit eyes
reflecting
the dancing flames
kindled of passion
flickering

see her long lithe lines
sway
as the violin serenades
and the man
in the moon
watches
with his golden glow wanting

slip into a tambourine trance
woven
with her raven hair spill
and rose red lips
inviting
she,
a coffee skinned siren
strutting her barefoot wanton

her bared bosom rises
and falls
in breathless tempo fed
temptation
ruby clad fingers
snapping
sensual hands
clapping

I see your eyes
as they
watch
the woman
and the hunger fed
demon
captured in your rise
wishing

wishing for even a
hint
of her heated rush brush
to slip
across your skin
and
brand you
with her gypsy’s fire

s.A.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-21 02:33 PM

whoa!

Hey Susan, hello and good to see ya

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-04-21 02:40 PM

Wowee!! Awesome write Susan! hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-04-21 02:40 PM

WOW!! Excellent dance of the gypsy gal...
such a free feeling in it...

perfect!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-04-21 03:52 PM

beautifully done

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-21 03:57 PM

Absolutely brilliant Tango

Dave

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-04-21 04:27 PM

soothsin..I can see her there..
hey move over a bit will ya
you are blocking the view

oh nevermind..just keep dancing
enjoyed you here lady love

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-04-21 04:41 PM

Am so pleased you all can feel the heat in this one - I love to watch woman words dance in the firelight - and hear the singing of the violins -

thanks for all your kind replies -

and D- hehe -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

8 posted 2005-04-21 05:49 PM

This was incredibly passionate and sexy. I have an addiction to gypsies and thier vuluptuous encantations. This was utterly lovely.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-04-21 09:28 PM

beautifully done!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-04-21 11:06 PM

thank you yv - I too feel passionately towards gypsy tendencies and personas

thanks kindly dixie

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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