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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2005-04-20 11:08 PM



That day and night had blend to be one
Or April shackled to the brief of spring
Spilled August in her raindrops
Even if the sky gasped violet breadths
Across swaying wheat, in emotional oceans
How could love be deeper in its kiss of mind

That thought be rapt in loyalty
As tenderness embodies dreams
In all the heart relates, in passion and pride
Through teardrops relied unrelenting
Even if time has gated the touch
Yet you knew…you knew

Copyright Kkh 4/20/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07
Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good
1 posted 2005-04-21 02:59 AM


Wow I do believe I am going to have to keep this little treasure kathleen. Excellent write.
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
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2 posted 2005-04-21 05:04 PM


Yes dear K.  This is certainly one for the
place of one's heart where memories and fine
poetry are stored...  Well done my friend.

yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

3 posted 2005-04-21 05:19 PM


Gorgeous.  I was truly moved.  I loved it.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-04-21 10:00 PM


much enjoyed this
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2005-04-21 10:34 PM


Or April shackled to the brief of spring
Spilled August in her raindrops
Even if the sky gasped violet breadths
Across swaying wheat, in emotional oceans
How could love be deeper in its kiss of mind

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in the emotions of ocean
all seasons meet

august and april sharing a raindrop...perfect bliss

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-04-21 11:11 PM


stirring -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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