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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-15 02:31 PM


Missing the "what is a girl fiend/friend"s initial when you would and do, forget that a girl/lady/woman is "best friend/bank/long term investment"

And you have missed something fromt the plot

Yes

You'll a rat, happy anywhere, doing anything, singing like you are a threesome

Spawned as only 66 could

Not tied/crucified/terrorised/made safe
As they do with dogs
Who don't have a licence

Out of country/area/region/state/government(if you can find it, and trust it)

And all you wanted to do, was watch

"some guy called Bing, another called William" singing a silly song about

"busy doing nothing".

dave

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1 posted 2005-04-18 12:25 PM


interesting  way to word this~

i like the way your mind thinks~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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