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0 posted 2005-04-15 02:50 PM


Easily cemented area looking up roads in a dream for a couple of wordly eyes knowing everything and wanting same in a vein that was insane and cared nothing for the same drifting in years remembering nothing

Eyes like crescents mooned in mouths of teeth glistening clinking undergrowth of thistles on spikes that moved

Leaving others to offer seed

That may grow

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1 posted 2005-04-18 12:19 PM



  I actually understand this one
but then we all perceive differently~
  cant say in words what it is i understand
  but as i read it something touched~
       kinda like  ~ now i get it!
      
           make sense to you?
    cant believe no one replied

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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