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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2005-03-29 09:06 AM




THE JUDGMENT

I can’t decipher this unrest nor can my mind surmise
The argument that flickers in the haze before my eyes
I can’t give thought to a debate of which I’m not a part
That tears the fibrous sentiments of someone else’s heart

If I could wake I’d see my name in lights across this land
And justices who deem my care by raising of a hand
Though fate will be determined in a courtroom so remote
Where no judicial panel reigns, and man will never vote

The date I take my exit from this unassuming stage
Is a day that is already written on a heavenly page
Speak not my name when I am gone, ask not if it was just
It is within the hands of God I place my only trust

There is no loved one competent to say what’s right or wrong
I only know within this fray is not where I belong
My God will speak in silent ways that we can’t understand
For it is He who will refrain, or raise a judge’s hand


Elizabeth Santos

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-29 09:10 AM


Last evening, a friend helped me set aside emotion for a moment and open doors to another light...she (wink), and this poem, had an impact...you are so enlightening...thank you Liz...love to you always...hugs
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2 posted 2005-03-29 09:20 AM


The date I take my exit from this unassuming stage
Is a day that is already written on a heavenly page
Speak not my name when I am gone, ask not if it was just
It is within the hands of God I place my only trust

~*~

Amen, and thank you, Lady Santos...

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3 posted 2005-03-29 09:32 AM


Jews and Christians say God, others say other things....

But whatever the source, I believe people are given tests. Sometimes they're obvious and agonizing, sometimes so subtle no one could possibly notice, but they're tests of who we really are.

Nations receive tests too, and I can't avoid the haunting feeling that we just failed one. It may be that when history books are written with America in past tense, this will be noted as a convenient reference point for talking about the way we chose to be as a civilization.

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Martie
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4 posted 2005-03-29 02:06 PM


Liz, dear friend...this speaks for so many.  You are so very special!  
passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-03-29 02:23 PM


a tragic issue indeed

speaking for myself, I would not want to be kept alive like that. If God wants to take me, then let Him. No sense in fighting it.

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6 posted 2005-03-29 11:23 PM


The day will come that even judges have to meet the ultimate judge. Hopefully, for their sakes, He will be more merciful to them than they were to Terry.

Excellent words, m'lady Santos

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-03-30 08:36 AM


Liz, this brought me to tears.....
so very touching.  Thank you for this gracious lady. Hugs.

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8 posted 2005-03-30 12:20 PM


Thank you for this dear lady.
Sending understanding hugs your way.

JL
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9 posted 2005-03-30 02:34 PM


Perfect.  Speaks volumes.
Enjoyed your compassion.

JL



jellybeans
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10 posted 2005-03-30 02:37 PM


oh gosh, this enlightenment helps to settle my sorrow greatly......thank you for this...
Denise
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11 posted 2005-03-30 04:08 PM


So true and comforting, Elizabeth.
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2005-03-30 08:55 PM


Nice writing...if our lives are in the hands of Judges, perhaps we should be a little more selective of who we place in these positions...James
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