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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-03-28 01:44 PM



There is a river,
inside my heart,
where you remain,
bathing, you dove
into my pool,
to take a swim,
drowning in my love,

Now you are forever there,
inside this Eden,
the streams continue to flow,
deeper, for all the tears,
my heart does sow,

Weeping for you,
missing you...

another tear...

falls...

the river becomes even deeper,

Love forever flows,
for you,
Inside my Eternal river.

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-03-28 01:53 PM


Very nice words

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-28 01:58 PM


Thanks again dave for repling and seeing my words, hearing my voice~

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-03-28 02:22 PM


beautiful!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-03-29 01:34 AM


Miss Spirit thank you!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-03-29 05:43 PM



My Lady - sometimes one must take a leap...and pray the pool is not empty...

Yours...never is.

Thank you.
Thy Knight

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2005-03-30 08:18 AM


Interesting write...

Thank you...

GR.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-03-30 09:12 PM


A fine one...from a Romantic Heart....James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2005-03-30 09:37 PM


I could never imagine the river in your loving heart ever going dry.


EA

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