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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-20 08:59 PM



Still . . .
Even now . . .
Those young girls —

Who call us together
With their white sleeves

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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1 posted 2005-03-20 09:07 PM


Iteresting write. Enjoyed the read.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-03-21 06:13 PM




But in wilderness
she exhibits her pink stain
glowing from within

A fragile lady blushes
remembering yesterdays

~*~

Thank you for the inspiration, John.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-03-21 06:21 PM


Excellent write...much enjoyed John!
hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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