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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2005-03-20 12:22 PM



I am everyman, and I’m frightened
I wonder what the evening brings
I hear the stone, rolling
And see, the cave dimming
I am everyman, and I’m frightened

I pretend that I am finally made whole
Feeling what a young man once felt
Touching upon what could have been
Crying in secret, over milk that I’ve spilt
I am everyman, and I’m frightened

I do understand that what’s done is done
But believe, I may yet be redeemed
In dreaming away the “everyday”
I try justifying, “who I am” with “what I am”
Hoping, I can at least acquaint them
I am everyman, and I’m frightened

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-20 01:10 PM


I remember this...as distinctly
as if I had read it just yesterday.


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2 posted 2005-03-20 01:13 PM


You am wranx! That am good!

--and so is this! I remember liking it very much the first time I read it...and I do now.

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-03-20 02:35 PM


wranx
Redemption comes from within. Enjoyed

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-03-20 04:46 PM


thanks for the repost
littlewing
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5 posted 2005-03-20 07:58 PM


It is ok to be frightened,
you taught me that.


suthern
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6 posted 2005-03-22 04:10 AM


I try justifying, “who I am” with “what I am”
Hoping, I can at least acquaint them

If you manage... would you tell me how? *S*

This is one of those poems that make me SO glad you're writing instead of doing decoupage. *G* Excellent work!!!

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2005-03-22 03:20 PM


I am glad you reposted this magnificence of you

into my library.

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and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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