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Combining
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Combining |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Combining Combining of the yes and no The yen and yang the black and white Is making do with sun and snow The dark of night and white of light It is the wheel that rolls the path And carries time upon its back The beginning and aftermath And all the things you think you lack Combining is a synthesis A drop of time upon a stage The cutting of the Kris and bliss That comes and stops at any age It must be done to reach a goal To travel round a rivers bend To build within your time a soul To synthesize your coming end For life is but a cross you bear The coinage for your time of share |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And combos are a dance in time, of two who would make footsteps rhyme, a click of heel and swirl of hem and rhythmed rhyme that has no end...  Thanks for the inspire, Sy!  |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
wisely said...you "combined" the sounds of the words splendidly too |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, my Dear Sonneteer! I love the yin-yanginess of this morning's poetic offerings! One of the most perfect combinations is your hands and a keyboard!  A mind is a terrible thing to waste ~ and you certainly are not wasting yours! Dark and Light, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! This piece has wonderful rhythm. If it weren't so early I could dance a leftover Irish jig to it.  Tea's on...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart It was not my lips you kissed But my soul |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderful combining of words, thoughts and images Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is making do with sun and snow The dark of night and white of light ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The coinage for your time of share ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your rhymes are worth all the coinage I got.  a tinkerbell penny for your poetic thoughts? *L*  *ww*    one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That it is Sir Sy, the coinage for our time of share. Well done, once again as always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I'll pay my coinage with a big thank you to all my friends that stopped by. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, A hug and a for you. |
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