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is somebody there? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Momentarily 50 i start to walk slowly trying to stall my gait, l3 hours to go; perhaps i could glide over the no fly zone and it's really the same as it always was should i gather daisies along the way and procreate a parachute for him (the dreaded always sweetens when a handsome escort enters these type of situations) or will he just know and be there already.... waiting with his promise, a round robin of wishes granted, when i turn the corner and exhale, i'd like to see that he was always there. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Goddess, a smart would always be waiting for you around all your proverbial corners.  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are loved  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Understand and enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
definately understanding this one Michelle... much enjoyed your words today. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent - love the ending - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"(the dreaded always sweetens when a handsome escort enters these type of situations)" Perfect! Love it! An understandable poem, that depicts the feelings of the poet on a sometimes touchy subject... __________ice/ford ><> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes. always there. that is what I wish for too. love it.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and how damn lucky for him? so, turn the corner already -- 50 comes soon enough ... (easier said eh?) edgy smooth deific one |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
it's really the same as it always was .. yep  BTW, Happiest of day to you! wishing you armloads of sunshine and lollipops, even a rainbow and some wildflowers! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids yea the big one came yesterday  |
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