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0 posted 2005-03-15 10:32 AM



Shadow filtered light

As petals fall, so does day

Castaways of time



© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-15 10:32 AM


absolutely perfect Haiku Kacy, enjoyed this very much.
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2 posted 2005-03-15 10:36 AM


thanks, Donna, for the generous reply
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3 posted 2005-03-15 10:36 AM


Agreeing with Donna. Splendid piece!
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4 posted 2005-03-15 11:20 AM


magnificient use of sounds and words!
another trip to the library I suppose!
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5 posted 2005-03-15 11:20 AM


Midnitesun
Good one, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2005-03-15 11:34 AM


Wonderful!

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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7 posted 2005-03-15 11:44 AM


Thanking each of you, for spending a moment here. My muse gifted me with this on a Sunday afternoon while sitting in a Japanese bonsai garden.
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8 posted 2005-03-15 11:51 AM


Soft and elegant. Bob
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9 posted 2005-03-15 11:56 AM


Excellent!
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10 posted 2005-03-15 12:45 PM


marvelous!!!
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11 posted 2005-03-15 01:00 PM


wishing I had such a garden nearby . . .

enjoyed

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12 posted 2005-03-15 09:45 PM


hey! This was great! Loved it!

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13 posted 2005-03-16 12:10 PM


like Maguro Sashimi in wasabi sauce, lite, but zesty  
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14 posted 2005-03-16 12:18 PM



thanks everyone, I am delighted you enjoyed this one

LOL, thanks Reb tuna, fresh....and though I am a vegetarian, I've tasted this treat, though I am not fond of wasabi.  

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