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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-03-13 09:05 PM

Atop the gnarled and withered vine,
rising into the rays, dancing unseen
winds, you stand defiant against
the morning’s kiss of dew.

You enchantingly tug against the
ply of my fingers, daring me to
let a single petal fall...why?

You knew the breath of me that
raced. You saw the pulse that ran
in torrid flow against still deep waters,
reflecting the glint of a single ray as
a smile emerged...taunting
me, calling my name beyond the
shifting sun seared dunes of a
memory.

You once filled my well, softly wet the
pout of my lips, traced our fingers
over cool skins...brought rain drops
to a summer’s morn...

Again I heard the lustful pound, the
sigh of sinful aching, the cries of
scattered dreams and moans of
waking morns...and as the withered
vine sagged...I hungered.
Are you there?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-03-13 09:41 PM

*sigh* oh... *sigh*
hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

2 posted 2005-03-13 10:44 PM

YES! Oh, yes I am!

(you weren't asking me, right?)
LOVED THIS, every line...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-03-13 10:47 PM

Yes, I'm here ~ but I wish I was there! lol

Linda

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-03-13 11:07 PM

Barry...there is such a passionate pull to this....wonderful writing!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-03-14 01:02 AM

Whew~who turned up the heat~

~Very passionate

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-03-14 05:16 AM

with all that passion how could one
not be~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-03-14 07:53 AM

You saw the pulse that ran
in torrid flow against still deep waters,
reflecting the glint of a single ray as
a smile emerged...taunting
me, calling my name beyond the
shifting sun seared dunes of a
memory.

Magnus, this was truely heart felt....
Always in for a real treat when reading you
Thank you for sharing

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-03-15 04:58 PM

Definitely a treat to read... both from the powerful emotions and the vivid images. Excellent!!

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