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Zinsser
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0 posted 2005-03-14 09:52 PM



Thoughtful when I think of you
Soft contemplation

Spirit and space have no end
We are
When we are
Nothing before
Our time matters
Or after
Each moment could be our last
For our worlds are
Far apart
Freedom in that knowledge
No holding back

Thoughtful when I think of you
Soft contemplation

© Copyright 2005 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2005-03-14 09:57 PM


Zinsser,
  softly contemplate...
  You have set the mood so well.  I can't think of anything profound to say so I guess I'll just tell you it is special in my book and a keeper.  
             miscellanea  

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2 posted 2005-03-14 09:57 PM


good write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Zinsser
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3 posted 2005-03-14 10:06 PM


Misc.... I looked up a few of your writes.."I'll Be Your Daydream" is soo very beautiful...  and thanks for your comment on my write

Bernie... good to see you and Thank You

marcel
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4 posted 2005-03-15 12:08 PM


softly, sensual piece! enjoyed!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-03-15 02:08 AM


Beautifully expressed. If only everybody could contemplate as softly...Sigh.


EA

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6 posted 2005-03-15 03:47 PM


Soft contemplation~lovely this.
Thank you for sharing.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

jwesley
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7 posted 2005-03-15 04:05 PM


Great way to put it, my friend...enjoyed.

jwesley

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