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Susan
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0 posted 2005-03-02 02:05 PM



your playful
makes my giddy
want to - up and go

you tickle touch
my giggle fun
making happy bones

click-clack dancing . . .
merrily . . .

across the floor
in sun dipped smiles
and little more

baring my pleasure
in the boyish charms
of you

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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1 posted 2005-03-02 03:06 PM


I love this.
its perfect.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-03-03 06:38 AM


you are a playground
in your eyes
and your gay way
makes me smile
manskin offerings
thanks babe you smile me

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2005-03-03 06:54 AM


Very joyous...

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-03-03 08:14 AM


sounds festive and happy...wonderful music you both author...
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2005-03-03 08:16 AM


sing a son of sixpence
pocket full of ryhme
id love to take a ride on him
dont you think it'd be sublime?

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-03-03 09:25 AM


It sounds as though you have met your match in the playfulness department! Have fun!


Linda

Susan
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7 posted 2005-03-03 10:14 AM


It is fun and lovely to have a nice bantar - and I've always been a child at heart - am glad you've all enjoyed a bit of play, and for your warm -

Inky - you crack me up

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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8 posted 2005-03-05 07:32 PM


One smile deserves another, this is a wonderful poem thanks for sharing it with us

Andrew

Martie
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9 posted 2005-03-05 08:44 PM


Susan

I'm glad to see your inner child is alive and well!  Lovely feeling of happy in this poem..enjoyed!  

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2005-03-05 11:30 PM


Nice...James
Sadelite
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11 posted 2005-03-05 11:33 PM


Darling poem, Susan!  Perfectly playful!

    ~sadie~

Susan
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12 posted 2005-03-06 02:44 PM


Thank you for your smiles and for having a bit of fun with me, my friends -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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