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NightFall
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0 posted 2005-03-05 06:49 PM


i went to see you today
no answers to my calls
the silence tells all
i miss you
i miss you so much my heart bleeds when i think of you
i love you and i always will do
time can not change a thing
just make my heart go on aching
it has now been nearly 10 years
since i last saw you
and saw you gaze
I miss you nan more than anything now
i need you nan if you only knew how
why do i still feel this way
time is suposed to heal you
with every comming of a new day
but then i stop and stand still
and think of you
and it hurts so much that your not around
i want to be swallowed up in to the ground
i love you nan more than words can say
annd i keep wishing that just for an extra day
that you could have stayed.


    In loving memory of my Nan
             R.I.P
             Died 1996

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

© Copyright 2005 Cheryl Jones - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-05 07:03 PM


I know
Marshalzu
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2 posted 2005-03-05 07:17 PM


Whilst losing someone close to you can be hard and hurt a great deal it is important to remember the good times that you have shared rather than dwelling on what you are missing. A great write.
Susan
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3 posted 2005-03-05 07:29 PM


I sooooooo understand this - the loss of one so very near and dear and necessary to our tender - my heart to yours

  susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Magnus
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4 posted 2005-03-05 08:22 PM


Yes,  remember all that you were given,
smile...it was a gift,  a treasure, one
that shall never fade...

sweetpoetess
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5 posted 2005-03-05 08:27 PM


Nice tribute. Awesome write.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Martie
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6 posted 2005-03-05 08:47 PM


NF

Your love and loss are so apparent in this poem....I understand and wish you well!  

NightFall
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7 posted 2005-03-06 03:57 PM


thankyou all so much, it is the good times that i miss with her and thats what makes me sad, i do cherish every minuet she spent with me and i spent with her, thankyou.
C.J

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

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