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ecrivan
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0 posted 2005-02-27 10:45 PM


When only one person understands
that means much more
than every writer
feigning comprehension

In fact so many are oblivious
to anything but immediate surroundings
why then  simplify poetic statements,
undo the quality of ones labour
so that it will be equally unread?

So I will keep the complexity of my work
not simplify it for more hits on a forum
after all I am here as a poet
not to run in a popularity race.
This is what I understand. -->

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-28-2005 11:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-02-27 11:04 PM


BRAVO! It's an honor to read you, Martin, and to know this write is true to your heart.
namaste, well done, mon ami
I haven't been reading as much here as I'd like lately, and have missed your writes. Toujours, vous etes interesant, et je pense que votre nom dites beaucoup a propos votre 'mindset'.  Merci, pour tout.  J'etude le francais en l'ecole superior, est c'est terrible apres 30+ years!  LOL

ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-02-27 11:10 PM


Thanks Midnite for your understanding


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3 posted 2005-02-28 03:23 PM


I totally agree Martin

I myself am not one of those complex writers. I just write what I feel, not trying to stun or compete with anyone...I am simple.

And sometimes being simple, I cannot understand what the more complex writers are writing. I do make the effort though.

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4 posted 2005-02-28 07:46 PM


But Martin, I find that most people think I am writing sad when happy and happy when sad...so interpretation will always be individual..and I do understand the "lack of" response feelings and  have learned that it is the enjoyment I get from expressing myself rather than numbers.  Besides I enjoy reading and learning about others through their words as much as  writing my own.

I for one have led a pretty "sheltered" contented small town life for 30 years working from home, leaving me with a lack of experience in understanding some of what others write  about. Many times I wait to read what others think first to see if I am on the right track.

hugs
M

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5 posted 2005-02-28 07:55 PM


I wouldn't change a thing.
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6 posted 2005-02-28 09:24 PM


Martin, your writings always make me sit back and ponder. Do I always understand them ? No.....but they still get my attention...lol. Well done. Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

ecrivan
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7 posted 2005-02-28 11:56 PM


Maureen

I'm with you on not being understood. At least getting read and stimulating interest is the part of the trip. This is why I'm here.

Dixie

I liked Steinbeck's books like The Pearl because the language was simple enough, it was the mental image that made the difference.


Chris,

Many do ponder; that gives me great joy



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-01-2005 12:05 AM).]

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8 posted 2005-03-01 11:12 PM


I was yellin' this last week! Yellin' it! It's a wonderful boost to get a lot of responses, and a downer when things tumble....but really, if you write the best you know how....what else matters?

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ecrivan
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9 posted 2005-03-02 12:23 PM


That's right, do what you do naturally...kind of like when I do my art I'm not looking to fit any 'current' trend
necessarily, I know what I do is contemporary but that's because of the titles we tend to give...thanks for sharing
and who cares when the responses are low or not, what's important is that it does touch somebody!

Opoetry4me,

Thanks for sharing too!


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10 posted 2005-03-02 07:37 AM


The most joy I find in writing, is the writing itself.  The responses are nice, but the writing and expressing myself is even nicer.  I understand this...
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