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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-02-13 11:43 AM



I mourn
grieving lost rainbows
driven from the gray
for the light has dimmed
overshadowed
by the encroaching bitter

I tremble
for I have become bare
no shelter near
having wandered too far
the dispossessed explorer
seeking myth

I fear
for I hear the lion’s roar
and the jackals pacing
waiting for despair
to finally overcome
and decay into carrion

I wish
I had never yearned
to kiss the horizon
but lingered in the village
happy amongst the ordinary
amidst certainty’s care

I cry
that I should never have heeded
the call of the jungle
those distant drums
echoing their beat
into my adventurer’s heart

I stand
awaiting the storm
which lingers just beyond this moment
knowing I chose the steps
leading to this precipice
o’er which souls are thrown

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-02-13 11:50 AM


I certainly understand that feeling Susan

Here's to better days ahead
M

Susan
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2 posted 2005-02-13 11:54 AM


thanks M - hate to be a downer this morning -but alas . . .  Appreciate your hug and smile-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-02-13 12:20 PM


Powerful write, dear Susan. There are these moments when we seem to stand at the precipice. From that moment on things improve.

Souls are meant to soar...

Love and hugs, beautiful poetess!

Margherita

Magnus
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4 posted 2005-02-13 12:33 PM


As one might say in response..."been there,
felt that."  One might often wonder when the emotional tides ebb..and they do.

And so shall your own.

Your art is flawless...

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-02-13 01:24 PM


Very poignant.

Eric

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-02-13 02:03 PM


Margaherta - yes - we are meant to soar - but I seem to have lost my wings - have a spare pair?  

Barry - thank you for the flawless, my friend - now if I could just find a nice quiet tidal pool where all seems to be calm and thriving -

Eric - thank you my friend -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2005-02-13 02:40 PM


Powerful emotions in this, Susan. Boy, this struck me as something I could relate so well to within my own little world. We do forge our own paths through our personal decisions, though difficult a trail they may be to follow. This was great, I really enjoyed it.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-02-13 03:02 PM


Susan, it matters not what style or mood that you write in ~ I always leave with something. May the storm that may be heading your way pass quickly and bring the sparkle back to your spirit.

You are a very expressive and talented poetess and I am a big fan of your poetry.

Sending you a big, warm hug,
Linda

Martie
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9 posted 2005-02-13 03:20 PM


Susan....understanding this all too well...it's so easy to walk there, but not as easy to get back.  A stregthening journey though.  
DavePage
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10 posted 2005-02-13 05:48 PM


So much I could say about this Susan but excellent is what I'll settle for.

Dave

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11 posted 2005-02-13 07:13 PM


I understand too.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000*    Journal!

Sunshine
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12 posted 2005-02-13 07:15 PM


Now how could I pass up
a poem that bears my own
last name?

Happy Valentines Day, Susan!

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2005-02-13 09:44 PM


dont look back

only the dead can do that

YOURE ALIVE ALIVE ALIVE
i tell you
and you wear it well

passing shadows
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displaced
14 posted 2005-02-14 01:06 AM


oh Susan
iliana
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15 posted 2005-02-14 02:53 AM


Susan........my thoughts are with you.   .....jo
Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2005-02-14 06:49 AM


you were forgiven
your lost
before you asked

god wrote s'ok
on your thoughts
and touched your heart

and my shoulder too
is always there
to sooth your sighs

enjoyed your depth hon
look toward tomorrow

Susan
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walking the surreal
17 posted 2005-02-14 02:44 PM


What kind hearts and beautiful souls you all gift to me with your friendship and love - it warms my heart and helps to ease the ache-

Love to you all - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2005-02-15 06:19 PM


Nice writing...James  
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