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milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
If I admitted to myself Spoke the sentiment truly felt The words would echo Wall to wall, Echo your name Evermore. If I watched you from afar And wished upon an unnamed star, Would you feel my gaze Into your soul and Know we are but Time before? I was promised to the storm Bought and owned by Fate when born. Hanging on my cross I cry For loving you. I choose to lie And live a silent lonely life Chained inside an empty house Of morrow’s want. Alas, will I not quench the burn? Nay, ‘tis sinful thought betrays my way, Yet, Thirst I still this endless day. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If I watched you from afar And wished upon an unnamed star, Would you feel my gaze Into your soul and Know we are but Time before? very pretty poetry, milkweed~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'I was promised to the storm Bought and owned by Fate when born. Hanging on my cross I cry For loving you. I choose to lie" Those are some powerful lines!! Very well done!  Happy Holidays!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"If I watched you from afar And wished upon an unnamed star, Would you feel my gaze Into your soul and Know we are but Time before? " I loved that part Grace. Good write! Merry Christmas! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"If I watched you from afar And wished upon an unnamed star, Would you feel my gaze Into your soul and Know we are but Time before?" ~ Just a few of the beautiful words worth repeating... A very lovely piece of writing, Dear Milkweed. Loving hugs, EA  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Absolutely gorgeous! I could feel this very deeply. You must post more often! Sincerely, miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Whoops--I meant to check the library box. This really spoke to me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful write! Happy Holidays |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just passing through again and saw this. Straight to the top where it belongs. Happy holidays. |
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