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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-11 07:49 PM


melding horizon
lovers embracing dearly
so near the sunset

morning sparrow lights
then bluejay and cardinal
new day, same old love

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-12-11 07:51 PM


sweet sounds well written
love felt in splended reveal
with delicate voice

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
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2 posted 2004-12-11 08:54 PM


wonderfully said, especially in tandem!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-12-11 10:47 PM


awesome!
garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-12-12 01:13 AM


beautiful Love senryus.
I enjoyed reading them.
hugs,
Ethel

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2004-12-12 02:19 AM


I enjoyed this. Keep up the poetry, you know I enjoy it.
Margherita
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6 posted 2004-12-12 05:43 AM


Very lovely!

Love, Margherita

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-12 11:15 AM


Beautiful write! Love this....

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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