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Open Poetry #34

counting the stars.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-12-07 12:27 PM

this moment is mine
the grass beneath me
and the stars above me
this moment is mine
the soft sound of my music in my ears
is like a lullabye
but the world is almost gone
i'd like to say that my hands are warm
my eyes are glossy
and my voice is silent
but we know thats not true
because my voice is screaming to reach the heavens
and my hands and digging into the ground
as i try and count the stars
to understand the universe.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2004-12-07 12:34 PM

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-12-11 08:13 AM

you had me there with you

nice write of a nice night

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-12-11 10:10 PM

The title of this one drew me right in there.
I love the stars and moon in the velvet skies at night!!
Hugs,
Ethel

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-12-12 08:13 AM

it's nice to still see the stars, many don't

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-12-12 11:15 AM

Great write Chelsea...I enjoyed reading this very much!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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