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JL
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0 posted 2004-12-08 07:22 PM


Have
You seen
My Flashlight?
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From here to there
and back again….
my mind racing
to and fro…

coffee
coffee

coffee
cup

bitter
bitter

bitter
cold


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WHAT!!?

Be nice!

© Copyright 2004 JL - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2004-12-08 07:25 PM


JL,
Not sure. Gotta a light?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Martie
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2 posted 2004-12-08 08:08 PM


JL

Nope, have you seen mine?

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-12-08 08:29 PM





I'll bet I haven't seen
your batteries, either!

James_A_Fraser
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4 posted 2004-12-08 08:32 PM


It's the number of cells that counts.....two, three, four(!)....or, um, penlight.....



~~J

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5 posted 2004-12-08 08:44 PM


Sorry, I can't see a thing in this darkness!
Hee hee. hugs, Chris

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6 posted 2004-12-08 11:10 PM


So.....? Ya hafta, you know, turn 'em on first!

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whiskey
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7 posted 2004-12-09 01:41 AM


No flashlight here sorry, good write very creative
whiskey
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8 posted 2004-12-09 01:41 AM


No flashlight here sorry, good write very creative
LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-12-09 06:35 AM


hahahaha, hate to tell you this, but I took it...it's right here....

JL....your a light in the dark...good one!

*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2004-12-09 06:00 PM


Very cool write! Creative!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Margherita
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11 posted 2004-12-09 06:25 PM


You and your flashlight are in perfect shape ... must be the coffee.

Great!

Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2004-12-09 09:44 PM


Very perky write JL...
TD

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