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Little Gold Purse |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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To be loved, is like a messenger Giving substance to the miscarriages And pictures of death The bone quivers and wounds Of distances which intersect Like a little golden purse Giving rise to the snap of Velcro And the Holy Lands of intimacy A humbling sensation that listens Existing in his face of measurements Teeming with life’s smiles Those big ones waterproofed Padded within this woman Like warm hands all over my skin Announcing the birth of some new Condensed infinity Committed subtlety Insistent persistence A place I wanna be One which never tosses me outa the boat But more so, would jump into rescue me Skinny dippin Ahhh yes, I taste the bright pleasure in your mouth A perfect place for crime The kind which breaths between a couple Not afraid of heights Darlin, I’d follow you into the 3rd dimension Perhaps that’s where we met? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Darlin, I’d follow you into the 3rd dimension Perhaps that’s where we met?" Another fantastic write from your magic pen Lee. And this ending is so very perfect! ~Sending hugs & smiles, Nancy~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yeah! Way to go Lee J! Excellent write my friend! Excellent! JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes me think of my mother, long ago... I don't know why, but it does, and I'm glad I could smile |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write LeeJ! Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, indeed a great write from a gifted poetess. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee J I love it. As I read it I remembered that in IT we call Agents who work for the client and supposedly us, "those who recruit people to sell or sometimes a shortened word to adequately describe them" and ourselves, those they sell we call "another shortened word". You can almost say it is likely being in a broken relationship where all was dreams until reality poked it's head up. Really good words Dave |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes indeed...what a magnificent poem of a love that goes so deep....I absolutely love it... |
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