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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-30 10:05 PM

Let me read the long of you
By firelight’s enchanted glow
Side by side ‘neathe its amber hue
Bare boned and opened soul

There are lines etched upon your face
With many a story to tell
And your eyes heart shine mirror make
A brimming silver gray well

Your hair reflects the shades of snow
Your skin blushed, yet pale
Your shoulders broad in manly show
Tapering to narrow hips of male

Hands of man strength touch my flesh
Yet gentle as summer soft lamb
Your words tender sighs bequest
Yet burn in passion seared brand

My fingers hunger for your feel
My mind for your mind’s kiss
Within this timeless moment surreal
I am overcome in awe blessed bliss

To read the love words of your heart
To hear the sweet spirit song
To know though miles in body may part
In these dream touched lands we belong

Side by side ‘neathe fire’s light
Bare boned and opened soul
Lovers in the mystic night
Along ocean wept seep shoals

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-11-30 10:11 PM

Break out the ice bags, linament and the
fire extinguisher!!!!

Goodness Girl...the sprinkler system is
gonna go off....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-11-30 10:15 PM

Barry - you sweetie pie - you delight me - thank you

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2004-12-01 07:58 AM

bring your long woman
and her knives
dance the sides there
by the gypsy spring
I am paper armies
fold me into a shadow
wear me as your man's hands
as your whispered necromancer

you do stir me satin one

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-12-01 11:04 AM

Mmmm - D - you paint such a pretty reply and it colors me in blushed pleasure - thank you for the warm shadow drape-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-11 08:54 AM

whew! very nice! yes

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-12-11 09:00 AM

Susan
A delight to read, very well done.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-12-11 03:23 PM

Beautiful write!

Eric

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2004-12-11 05:03 PM

Susan

You are excellent - just excellent.

There a few people whose books I would buy on just a name.

You are one.

Dave

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2004-12-11 05:21 PM

A senual delight to the senses. Your words are filled with a romantic heat that paints a picture of passion. I love it...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-12-11 07:19 PM

Thank you my friends, for your warm embrace of words - and Dave for your most kind compliment -

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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