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Cull Of Fire
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Cull Of Fire |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fierce felt brilliance Pull emotions full The air is red and ripe Where silence smoldered And hearts erupt too thick to speak Pouring from the eyes the soul Bringing gravity to molecule Gasping luminary range, exchange Burning off contradiction In combustible quotient of two And the flame burns blue For each star holds true Inner spaces atmosphere White the light of creation Comes so purely Welding questions with the answers We become the cosmic dancers Spark the stark of velvet night Fire grows the long and lean Infused of all the moist between The center but a core of fire And all the dream of one desire To brand from inside out The close that we are all about As flame is gathered And suns bow down to love Copyright Kkh 12/06/04 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love the flow of this, it has a nice lilt |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A truly lovely write! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
brand from inside out....what a way to describe!!! I always know, when I click on you, I'm in for a real treat...candy sounds, eyes, and feelings. Terrific! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Kathleen... lovely flow and enjoyed your words! Hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow...this was absolutely wonderful. I loved how it flowed and how descriptive this was. Well done. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful write TD, as always! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!!!! Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice K. 450 degrees for thirty minutes and voila.... Remind me to bring the hotdogs. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Welding questions with the answers We become the cosmic dancers Spark the stark of velvet night Fire grows the long and lean Infused of all the moist between The center but a core of fire And all the dream of one desire” Love this write, but... This part tells the whole story. Sweet dreams. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And all the dream of one desire To brand from inside out The close that we are all about As flame is gathered And suns bow down to love ****************************** the sun could only bow to such a parallel of itself, so lovely |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
The center but a core of fire And all the dream of one desire To brand from inside out The close that we are all about As flame is gathered And suns bow down to love Interesting! I especially liked this part! dautz... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that ending! yes! |
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