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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2004-12-06 06:42 PM





*


Within your eyes

filled with love

the mysteries

of creation unveil

and I need not say a word

I just know

for I stand tall and straight

at the center of All there is

while I contemplate

the Very Source

in deep awe

....within your eyes.

*
Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-12-06 06:45 PM


"for I stand tall and straight

at the center of All there is

while I contemplate

the Very Source

in deep awe

....within your eyes."

YES!!  How beautiful this is!!!
Hugs~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-12-06 06:46 PM


Now this creates a oneness of purity...

It's beautiful, Margherita!

choshi
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3 posted 2004-12-06 06:51 PM


What a beautiful poem ~M........

Warm wishes   ~P

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4 posted 2004-12-06 09:56 PM


My goodness this is lovely. Very much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Dautz Write
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5 posted 2004-12-06 10:02 PM


First of all, I'd like to comment on how well the picture highlights your poem and visa versa!  Beautiful poem.

Dautz

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-12-07 07:50 AM


how utterly beautiful...what an inspiration this picture is, can completely understand where your words come from...lovely!
Ericc
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7 posted 2004-12-07 08:11 AM


Beautiful Margherita.

Love,
Eric

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-12-07 08:21 AM


Margherita
Lucky him you just offered him the world.
Beautiful

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2004-12-07 10:35 AM


Divinely lovely...

Love & Light,
Linda

Margherita
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10 posted 2004-12-08 09:29 AM


Thank you my friends!

In the eyes the world, yes dear Seymour!

Love to all,
Margherita

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11 posted 2004-12-08 09:38 PM


Amazing write Margherita!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

DavePage
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12 posted 2004-12-09 02:09 PM


Beautiful words

regards

Dave

~DreamChild~
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13 posted 2004-12-09 02:14 PM


whoa... cool pic!
ice
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14 posted 2004-12-09 04:59 PM


We always stand in the middle, directly at the halfway point of history and infinity...this poem confirms my feelings of that concept.
enjoyed
__________ice
   ><>

MGROVES
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15 posted 2004-12-10 12:45 PM


amazing and beautiful


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16 posted 2004-12-10 04:41 AM


Just an amazing presentation, and Happy Holidays my friend.

                        
Let there be peace on earth ~ and let it begin with me

passing shadows
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17 posted 2004-12-10 08:38 AM


I am enjoying the creativity of your love and passion
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