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In The Waves Of Your Sea
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In The Waves Of Your Sea |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
In The Waves Of Your Sea Your love flows liquid down the hills of me, it nourishes my valleys, flowers all my meadows.... You rain and I draw in all my soil can hold, until you pond in my low places and run over.... As I soften, streams gather, flow to rivers, rivers to my empty lands, green promises abound.... Carry me, carry all of me, erode my mountain until I am a blue atoll in the waves of your sea.... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful James. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolute! Beautifully written and felt |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely beautiful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wish I could find the words to express how wonderful I think this is... how the words wash over me... but it leaves me speechless. Such beautiful work... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yep! Yep! Very nice James_A_Fraser. JL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Carry me, carry all of me, erode my mountain until I am a blue atoll in the waves of your sea.... yup...this made me sigh...beautiful Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
An absolutely beautiful write, James. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A passionate declaration, Jamie....lucky is she it is written for!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh dang, James... Write a tear jerker why don't you? Hanky alert next time, buster! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my |
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