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Sun Dried
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Sun Dried |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Suns golden rays have scorched my brain, time for me to take the faraway train, having some mind left before I go insane, Dried up, not enough water to feed on, thorns poked and pricked, you I bleed on, now is the time, to uproot and move-on, Burnt to a crisp, black as ash, atomospheric burn and crash, time for love to make a mad dash, Baked, fried, scorched, and died, not even water from tears I've cried, could keep your love alive inside, Even though I am crunchy, someone will come along hungry, tasting me, thinking I am munchy, Too long have I been in the sun, time for shade, relaxation and fun, sorry, I have got to run, I will lay in the bed, you LIED, in the dark shade I will hide, withered, shriveled up,baked not fried... Laying, in need of showers of love forever waiting to be drenched with REAL love, come rain down on me, Send me an angel from up above, God knows how much I have tried, For now I remain sun dried. Golden rays of sun can deceive by their warmth, only to burn your skin and damage you in the end**** Too much of a good thing can be bad for you**** Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Laying, in need of showers of love forever waiting to be drenched with REAL love, come rain down on me, Send me an angel from up above, ARH, this is a very beautiful, yet sad write. When there are expectations, we will always suffer. What is REAL love? Real love is unconditional and it just IS, YOU ARE REAL LOVE, nobody can give it to you. Just my thoughts. A hug to you, dear poetess. Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
one very emotional write, done well, with great feeling.... Enjoyed, thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed this too...and what Margherita said about expectations is true hugs M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I really like this. Dave |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very sad but deep and meaningful....it is a poem of hurt but with courage of hope and beauty to find...a great poem...thank you.. Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. (Victor Hugo.) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very true....sigh |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very glad I stopped in here...Truly enjoyed the read and the thoughts... jimmy |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Emotion, love the emotion. JL |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
I liked it alot.. Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive! |
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