5th - A Window No one remembers

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Open Poetry #34

5th - A Window No one remembers

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-11-18 06:15 PM

Opaque as your dreams of something consider
Mindless dreaming cover as you seek

deliverance

Washed in sweet scant secretions
the world for you

trembles

for a feeling

of rain washing a window

on a night

no-one

remembers

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2004-11-18 06:54 PM

This is powerful writing Dave.

Eric

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-11-18 07:46 PM

Thanks Eric

Dave

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