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RSWells
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0 posted 2004-11-18 02:04 PM



I plow sonnets as would farmers' furrow
differing as to past or present tense,
he tills toward a future as he harrows,
I rail against the limits of the fence

He seeds a hopeful plat of known dimensions,
I bleed in woeful echoes from a past,
his faith's in shallow burials' ascension,
I break a bone to prey on marrows' mass

His roots are cellared waiting for a season,
the dark, the rain and cold are merely tools
while hindsight nearly blinds this sinners' reason
so often injured sparring with the rules

while both invest their honest sweat and toil
one's strength is he can often choose his soil

© Copyright 2004 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-11-18 02:07 PM


and you choose well Richard. It is good to have you back in the blue!  
LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-11-18 02:10 PM


He seeds a hopeful plat of known dimensions,
I bleed in woeful echoes from a past,
his faith's in shallow burials' ascension,
I break a bone to prey on marrows' mass

it's a mighty good thing....to choose one's own soil

Tremendous write

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-18 03:39 PM



Excellent, Richard.  
Everything sets this
back in time just right!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-11-18 03:52 PM


RSWells
Excellent read enjoyed.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-11-18 06:28 PM


"while hindsight nearly blinds this sinners' reason
so often injured sparring with the rules"

You know, Richard, it is just that about you that makes your poetry so good.  I admire you and your poetic field.  I like that new pic too!  

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