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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-11-16 06:17 PM



                  day 251

                  Jean


                  Sent her roses on her marrying
                       day
                  For friendship that would likely
                       pale away
                  I insisted a dozen yellow
                       stems
                  to arise from a crystal vase
                       like gems

                  They were lovely by her window
                       displayed
                  I was glad in spite of the price
                       I'd payed
                  Though other friends thought it a bit
                       too much
                  From what I heard by their whispers
                       and such

                  But I was pleased to have done such
                       a thing
                  Before she disappeared within
                       his ring

                  Years have passed and that ring
                       has since broken
                  I wonder if she recalls
                       that token




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~DreamChild~
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1 posted 2004-11-16 06:21 PM


how very endearing... perhaps she does... you do!




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2 posted 2004-11-16 06:28 PM


I am loving this series, this too is all too real, and so nicely presented.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-11-16 06:39 PM


I'll just bet she thinks back and remembers.
Love this Kraw.
Hugs~

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4 posted 2004-11-16 07:20 PM


ah...

yes I too am enjoying this series


nicely done Kraw...

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displaced
5 posted 2004-11-16 08:41 PM


I'm sure she does, yes
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6 posted 2004-11-16 09:52 PM


Krawdad

Flowers don't last either, but the thought behind the gift, does.  As a florist, I enjoyed this, and I'm sure your friend remembers.

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