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Open Poetry #34

It Would Be Nice

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-15 11:48 PM

It Would Be Nice

I love you sweetheart.
Even if my ability to
love is limited to my
understanding of love,
I promise to love you
with every part of me
that knows how to love.
And while I love you
it would be nice if
you would love me too.

JamesLee
November14
2004

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2004-11-15 11:53 PM

I always assume that I am going to give more than I get.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-16 05:18 AM

Love changes over years, the way we love, I think

nice write there James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-11-16 06:38 AM

"limited to my understanding..."

but we continue to learn as we grow...

Thank you, James.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-16 07:43 AM

beautiful!!!

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