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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-13 10:45 PM


fresh grass
misty morning
cold dew
on naked toes

behind the sunbeams
the majestic rainbow
leprechauns
dance
in pots of gold

children echo
across creation
the lands listens
in silent awe

laugh now sweet child
the times are happy

one day
one life
everything tends to change

           ~Express Yourself~
          

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
1 posted 2004-11-13 11:22 PM



Very good.  Very much in the mood.

John

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Gaia
2 posted 2004-11-13 11:27 PM


very nicely done!
Kethry
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3 posted 2004-11-14 12:56 PM


Lovely images of sunshine and rainbows until the end when the change came. Good job, nice even flow.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2004-11-14 11:49 AM


Love this Derrick!

~Alli~

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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28
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predestined and foreknown
5 posted 2004-11-14 03:56 PM


nice post.

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

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