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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-11-12 01:38 AM



                         Day 246  

                         Visitor


                         Better than the ease
                         and the comfort of sleep
                         is the hour before
                         when she is here

                         Warmer than a Greek Myth
                         ought to be
                         she soothes the
                         cold day into a cold night
                         and frees this constipated pen

                         Like the sound
                         of an ill wind in a hidden storm
                         or in silence
                         holding her breath
                         she opens a treasure
                         for me to choose from

                         It is all possible now
                         with no reserve
                         and no demands
                         and no reason to hold the ink

                         But jealous of them all
                         she always takes back
                         those not laid to rest
                         and in the morning
                         they are all gone




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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-11-12 03:22 AM


yeah...*sigh*
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2 posted 2004-11-12 04:23 AM


nice


Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2004-11-12 07:16 AM


enjoying these sir.. the depths and insights as well as the talent itself..


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4 posted 2004-11-12 08:51 AM


Bravo.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-12 08:58 AM


Gawd I'm enjoying these...
Love the 'constipated pen' thought.

Hugs & Such, Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

myheart
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6 posted 2004-11-12 09:40 AM


Addicting is what your words are sir.

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~HonorĂ© de Balzac

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