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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-11-12 07:48 AM


I see you dancing in the rain
With inner joy you can’t contain
Till a shout breaks your fantasy
And you shiver in lost ecstasy

Yes I watch from darkness
And see the change to sadness
And cry with you in sorrow
Struggling into tomorrow

Gloom


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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2004-11-12 07:49 AM


painful yet beautiful at the same time.  Very well done Proff.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-11-12 08:01 AM


Professor,
Some excellent lines.
" And cry with you in sorrow
Struggling into tomorrow"


Catrina
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since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

3 posted 2004-11-12 08:21 AM



That call back
to reality can be
too much
for some of us.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-12 09:31 AM


*understanding this*
myheart
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 160
lost in your eyes
5 posted 2004-11-12 09:44 AM


When reality shouts at you, your smile is turned upside down.  Well done!
~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~Honoré de Balzac

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