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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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some days the sorrow just seems to seep in blue drip melancholy slow slip suffering of unknown origin running in rivulets of discontent disturbing still waters of once known bliss a lament of should be a regret of could be grieving tears of wishes lost to yesterday never to be found in tomorrows left only with wounded whispers of "i am" s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... sometimes it simply comes down to the "Iam" nicely done ma'am.. nicely done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...I Am....and that is all that matters. Much enjoyed the read Susan. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
some days the sorrow just seems to seep in blue drip melancholy slow slip suffering of unknown origin running in rivulets of discontent Yes, you have written this so well. Much enjoyed. ~myheart~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Superbly written, Susan. Your words touched me deeply and I felt each and every poetic one of them. Loving hugs to you, Special Susan! Linda P.S. And I am glad you are you!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your warm hugs always bless my heart with friendship - for that I am grateful - my love to you all -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow , yes "some days , I know those this was so excellently expressed Hope |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
days are just minutes some spend some linger but more follow to be new moments felt the empty edges here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Susan, you are outstanding, and so is your work...a tremendous read....enjoyed. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
a lament of should be a regret of could be **I feel you, gentle blue soul** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerfuly beautiful. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ya know...it's like you've looked right into my soul and have written what I often feel... this is wonderful writing.... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm - thank you all for your heart hugs and kind souls -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! JL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This touches deeply... and is recognized by many of us... Well written!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you JL and Suthern - for your kindness - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
left only with wounded whispers of "i am" and that about sums it up, no other choice, but to accept as hard as it may be for some of us a some times more than others.. wise womanly words written |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Susan! That was absolutely fantastic. You most certainly have a way with words. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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