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The Bog |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Bog Please help me for I sink a bog A hand, a rope, a piece of log I’d even grab a goodly thought A kindly piece the heart has wrought It’s true I walked a careless way Too frivolous the gift of day And now I’m lost within a fog And in the mist I stepped a bog The candle that I held aloft I did not know the wax grew soft The heat of which distract my mind With bobbles of a mortal kind And now I sink with all I hold With all this worldly weight of gold And fantasy that stayed my hand Cannot pull me from the sand Before I sink the eons grime I pray you do not waste, your time. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Seymour...man you do these so well. I just love your work. Bravo my friend. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You truly amaze one with the versatility of your verse~ 'Tis clear that you treat us to such diversity in your pennings~ Grand Sunday morn to you, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy, this is rich with layers of time and everyone's fancy... Whatever would we do without our morning stew? It boggles the mind.  |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Mr. Tabin, I have been reading your works, and they are so wonderful ! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I have a log to reach across your bog grab hold! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
run rhythm/rhyme Not at all what I expected...thought maybe I'd step into a cranberry lot, or enjoy a piece of cranberry pie...hope your "bogginess"/fogginess passes soon, but not before we hear another tune. hehehehe Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Ditto to what MyHeart said...I love your poems!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
As long as I have your words to read I'll never feel I wasted my time. You Sir, light the way of my day. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 You are kind, thank you. Marge Hugglets back sweet and thank you. Sunshine Thank you love. myheart And I've been readng your replies. Thank you Martie I surely will, thank you. VAS Your wish is my command. *Alli4000* And I love your replies. inot2B A dear reply, thank you. passing |
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